It's a shame.
You started off really well with this track. The build up of the synth was good and I liked the way the beat kicked in. From there it just started to go downhill. You could have added a few breaks in there and maybe a nice bassline. What happened to the ending?
Hehe, it's a loop:D The song isn't complete yet, I just wanted some feedback :D Breaks and shit are all in the final version :)
I gave you 10 for effort as thats the best your going to get.
You class some midi sounding sounds, that are fast paced, drum and bass?
My first ever d and b tune was better then that.
You had no breaks, no hi hats, to repetetive. You didn't even have a mother fucking bassline bitch. Drum and bass is all about the bass.
Your drum sounded like something out of a zelda snes game and your bass, well what fucking bass!!!???
DONT FUCKING SLATE MY MUSIC THRU JEALOUSY ASS HOLE.
NO BREAKS?(the begining and end of the song)...
NO HI-HATS??(listen closer - they are there!)...
TOO REPETETIVE?(yeah, if you listen to the first 16 measures , it bulds up afetr that)...
NO BASSLINE(at the 2nd part of the song , i decreased the pitch of the 3rd note of the loop 7x over , creating a bass line, seperating that loop as not being melodic ...
Zelda sucks.... i spent 7 hours out of the 16 just working on the drums...
i made them on fruity loops...but then
i cut them up to death on Acid 3.0
zooming in wicked close just to get those little shitty bass drums rollin'.
I'll slate you all i want...
you have no talent :P
if u called "smoke weed"
sumthin' else... it would get
at the most 45-50 downloads...
timing was everything....on top of that, i'm not jealous...
i'm just confused on how potheads were
duped into your "POP" reference
of Mary Jane.............
your a lucky joke...
Not bad, drums are a little quiet and the bassline could be a little harsher.
HI MOLZ I LOVE YOU! YOU CAN BEAT ME UP ANYTIME!
I wouldn't call this Trance music, more ambient. Nice little tune you have its sounds more like midi samples then wav samples tho. Maybe you could add a little bit more agression to the 4x4 beat to make it sound more trancy.
thx for the tip man
Nice tune mate. Reminds me of when i used to go to a club called bakers about 4 years ago, thats in birmingham!
Thanx!! yeh bakers is still there, although it isnt all that popular anymore!!!
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